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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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i see this was taken at 47mm, what would that be equivelant to on a 50d non full frame camera?
Speaking purely technical, your photo is as good as most of your other shots, meaning excellent. The image is sharp and nicely colored and the shutter speed is proper for the overall "flow." The softness of the water surface reflection between the rocks gives the photo a tranquil expression.
Yet, when I look at the photo, my eyes are jumping back and forth. When I try to move from the rocks over the log to the fall, I get lost. I think it is because there are too many competing focus points that lack inter-connectivity.
For me, this photo is a composition of 3 individual sections, the rocks, the log, and everything else in the background. The horizontal positioning of the log is working as a visual divide, cutting off the front 2/3, rather than serving as a guide through the shot (leading from front to back). That leaves the waterfall and its stunning bowl shaped surrounding cut off from the majority of the shot.
Of course, as usual, that is only my impression, but I hope I expressed my thoughts well enough to be understood,
Ingo
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